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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   October 4th 2016, 22:01

Swift Armor Exchange: CC & SC = 300 & 135

Warrior’s Seal CC & SC = 125 & 31

Molten Earth Jutsu CC & SC = 415 & 228
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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   October 7th 2016, 21:34

Okay calculating gains via selling jutsu only:
2 B class, 2 A class , 1 E class, 6500 Ryo earned. End of this circle of selling jutsu.

Cost for Original seal -- 200 AP.

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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   November 3rd 2016, 12:38

License Registration Form
New Jutsu and blueprints. Summonings mostly.
Request for Manager Interaction:
 

Jutsu Creation:
 

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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   November 24th 2016, 22:33

bump because i can't f---ing approve myself Razz


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   March 6th 2017, 17:36

Bump like a catholic rabbit


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   March 8th 2017, 09:49

Katon Infernal Armor
Cost: 460 / 253 (Upkeep: 253/114)

Katon Inferno Dance
Cost: 480 / 264

Katon Tiger Claw
Cost: 500 / 257 (Rolls lowered to +3)

Devil Beast
Cost: 490 / 270 (270/ 140)
Combat rolls = +3

Chaos Tornado
Cost: 470

Nightmare Mauling
Cost: 480

Beast Weapon
Cost: 560 / 364

Mk2 Tiger Claw
Cost: 580 / 377

Inferno Maw
Cost: 600 /400

Hellfire chains
Cost: 570/370

Storm Claw
Cost: 420/231

Earth Impact
Cost: 440/154

Rupture Maul
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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   March 8th 2017, 10:11

4/5   left. You forgot Taiyoumaru's skills

You also forgot item approvals


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   March 12th 2017, 08:30

Topic was addressed on skype. values

Rising Sun - 410/226
Hellifre Arena - 430/237
Searing Slicer - 450/248


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   April 30th 2017, 11:52

1.A form of Kunai with a designed tip to carry a small item, wire, explosion tag, ext.
Dmg: 10 + 1 extra item effect.
( Blue Print: 1X Ingot + 1 Gem slot Optional.)

2.Priest's Sandals
Worn by priests or other rural citizens, these light material shoes allow very little protection but offer a person the best in mobility.
Effect: +15 Dex.
(Blue print: 1X Ingot

3.Temple Wraps: Place, Feet
Near bear footed, these light weighted metallic wraps secure and protect the soles of one's feet and the top of the foot. Part of a sacred garb, it flowes with divine energy to make the wearer more agile and stronger. The metallic part makes kicks hit harder.
Effect: + Dex 15 + STR +5
(Blue Print: 1 X Ingot + 1 Gem slot optional)

4.Duel-Kusarigama
A duel weapon that is constructed of two smaller scythes, 1 foot handle with curved blades for each hand. Attached to the handles at the bottom is a steel chain that connects the two together. A versatile weapon that allows both melee and range combat. Also capable of tying up enemies.

Effect: 45 DMG + Bind STR = STR x1.50
Blue Print: X3 Ingots + 2 Gem slots optional

5.Tiger Claw
A melee one handed weapon that is worn on the back of the hand and wrist. Use of this weapon is ideal for those for close combat, and skilled to slash at an opponent. Composed of three sharpened blades and a handle for strikes with the weapon.
Effect: Dmg= 30
Blue Print: X2 Ingots + 1 Gem Slot Optional)

2 – 5 Denied – until fixed

Kunai w/ Item Carrier: Approved

Priest’s Sandals Too high of an P.Effect: Should be around +8

Temple Wraps: Should have it read that is just blessed from the priests/monks that created it as well. P. Effect: STR +10 | DEX +5 (Doesn’t say anything to say makes you lighter I’d add that too for the reason it increases DEX.

Duel Kusarigama – We call Kama’s or sickles for these items. DMG: 30 | Chain Bind Strength = STR 250 and lower.

Tiger Claw -
P Effect: +5 STR | +5 DEX
DMG: 30


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   April 30th 2017, 12:49

Fixing the following 2-5.

2.Priest's Sandals
Worn by priests or other rural citizens, these light material shoes allow very little protection but offer a person the best in mobility.
Effect: +8 Dex.
(Blue print: 1X Ingot )

3.Temple Wraps: Place, Feet
Near bear footed, these light weighted metallic wraps secure and protect the soles of one's feet and the top of the foot. Part of a sacred garb, it flowes with divine energy to make the wearer more agile and stronger. The metallic part makes kicks hit harder.
Effect: + Dex 8 + STR +5
(Blue Print: 1 X Ingot + 1 Gem slot optional)

4.Duel-Kusarigama/ Kama
A duel weapon that is constructed of two smaller scythes, 1 foot handle with curved blades for each hand. Attached to the handles at the bottom is a steel chain that connects the two together. A versatile weapon that allows both melee and range combat. Also capable of tying up enemies.
P. effect: +5 Strength.
Effect: 30 DMG + Bind STR = 250
Blue Print: X3 Ingots + 2 Gem slots optional

5.Tiger Claw
A melee one handed weapon that is worn on the back of the hand and wrist. Use of this weapon is ideal for those for close combat, and skilled to slash at an opponent. Composed of three sharpened blades and a handle for strikes with the weapon.
P. Effect: +5 STR | +5 DEX
Effect: Dmg= 30
Blue Print: X2 Ingots + 1 Gem Slot Optional)


Awaiting second review for items.


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   April 30th 2017, 15:13

Reviewed and cleared for approved. The P.Effect are given based upon the ingot that is used. Its my fault for not informing Grave about that. so that P.Effect will vary based upon metals used and can also stack. Also adds to Damage based upon metal used.


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   April 30th 2017, 23:05

Another jutsu and item post-- Selling 1, 3, 4 of Jutsu here for site. The rest I'll keep as personal jutsu I suppose-- just so no one else can mass replicate unless they pay me-- cause they are pretty good. But sold jutsu can still have owners that wont work on them?

Either way there it is. Also don't forget to check the items please.

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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   May 13th 2017, 00:16

Corrections-- made from skype conversation with Grave. Removing the Rubber shield. :

1.[+ -Tai-ken Style: Snip the Web - >]
[> Jutsu Description]: A Taijutsu move utilizing the use of a sword. A precision based series of slashes designed for attacks-- but also work to disrupt enemy tools that depend on a constant stream of chakra. This jutsu is most effective against the art of "Puppetry" ninjutsu to severe chakra strings and prevent their involvement.
[+ Stamina Cost:] <
[+ Type:] < - [Offensive & Supplementary]
[+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank:] < - 0 + C
[+ Damage +/or Effect] < Cut Puppet/Chakra strings and negate related jutsu. + Target enemy may not use Puppetry tools or jutsu for 1 turn.
[+ Requirements+/or Restrictions]: Requires Tai-ken style + User must have an active Chakra Blade/weapon to use this jutsu.

2.[+ - Doton: Seismic Pulse Jutsu - >]
[> Jutsu Description]: By training to the peak of one's potential in Earth-Release, one can become one with the earth and learn to wait and listen. With this jutsu, one's senses become one with the earth below to allow them a powerful sensory ability. By feeling the vibrations in the earth, one can detect hidden enemies and traps with incredible accuracy that sight or sound couldn't reprieve. Its an excellent tool to use against the Silent Mist technique and other combat scenarios that makes sight impossible.
[+ Chakra & Stamina Cost:] < - [Leave Blank] (Upkeep)
[+ Type:] < - [Supplementary]
[+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank:] < - Stomps foot to the ground + C class
[+ Effect] < - User gains full sensory awareness of a 1 kilometer radius around self (no eyesight/sound required) . Negate stealth/concealment/trap jutsu and Stealth Dice =30 instantly.

[+ Requirements + Restrictions]: Enemies must be in contact with the ground. Levitated/Flight enemies are not detected.
[+ Parent Jutsu:] < - Heightened Senses Ability.
[+ Creator:] Asura Jiin.

3.+ - Doton: Doryūheki/Mud Wall - >
> The user creates a wall of earth via their chakra or manipulation of surrounding soil. The wall is created to defend against powerful attacks. The wall is infused with chakra which allows it to take a variety of attacks from enemy ninjutsu.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost:
+ Type: Defense
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 4+ B
+ Effect: Blocks Damage= END X 1.20

Rasengan Jutsu-- (No critique was made to fix this so assume its correct. )

Making new jutsu to replace lava shield.


(4) + - Youton: Molten Core Chakra Mode- >
> User draws in the thermal energy of the ground and infuses it with their chakra-- causing an aura of lava to cloak the caster. Though its chakra manifested, it carries the same durability and intense heat of molten lava. It acts as an armor and weapon for close quarter combat. To use this jutsu makes the user one with the land and heat of the depths of the earth. To attack carelessly against this force will bring one’s own destruction upon them. It is rumored the internal temperature the caster generates from this jutsu is close to the temperature of the earth's mantle-- hotter than any material can withstand.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost: (Upkeep)
+ Type: Offense, Defense, Supplementary.
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 5 (Unique hand sign) + S
+ Effect: STR + END X 1.40 + Taijutsu/Melee base-attacks dealt/received causes MAX burns to enemies + Youton Jutsu damage is increased by X 1.50

(Subject to change of staff disagree)


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   May 19th 2017, 14:34

Bump-- I';d like this approve before its buried again damnit!


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   May 19th 2017, 22:35

I'll be taking over for this part as I was in the area in doing so.

1.[+ -Tai-ken Style: Snip the Web - >]
[> Jutsu Description]: A Taijutsu move utilizing the use of a sword. A precision based series of slashes designed for attacks-- but also work to disrupt enemy tools that depend on a constant stream of chakra. This jutsu is most effective against the art of "Puppetry" ninjutsu to severe chakra strings and prevent their involvement.
[+ Stamina Cost:] <
[+ Type:] < - [Offensive & Supplementary]
[+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank:] < - 0 + C
[+ Damage +/or Effect] < Cut Puppet/Chakra strings and negate related jutsu. + Target enemy may not use Puppetry tools or jutsu for 1 turn.
[+ Requirements+/or Restrictions]: Requires Tai-ken style + User must have an active Chakra Blade/weapon to use this jutsu.

APPROVED

2.[+ - Doton: Seismic Pulse Jutsu - >]
[> Jutsu Description]: By training to the peak of one's potential in Earth-Release, one can become one with the earth and learn to wait and listen. With this jutsu, one's senses become one with the earth below to allow them a powerful sensory ability. By feeling the vibrations in the earth, one can detect hidden enemies and traps with incredible accuracy that sight or sound couldn't reprieve. Its an excellent tool to use against the Silent Mist technique and other combat scenarios that makes sight impossible.
[+ Chakra & Stamina Cost:] < - [Leave Blank] (Upkeep)
[+ Type:] < - [Supplementary]
[+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank:] < - Stomps foot to the ground + C class
[+ Effect] < - User gains full sensory awareness of a 1 kilometer radius around self (no eyesight/sound required) . Negate stealth/concealment/trap jutsu and Stealth Dice =30 instantly.
[+ Requirements + Restrictions]: Enemies must be in contact with the ground. Levitated/Flight enemies are not detected.
[+ Parent Jutsu:] < - Heightened Senses Ability.
[+ Creator:] Asura Jiin.

x No, I understand what it does but not instantly roll I will only allow it to be at least +5 but that is it. As even sensory type shinobi cannot get a 100% accurate reading of someone they are looking for as shown during the fourth shinobi war.

3.+ - Doton: Doryūheki/Mud Wall - >
> The user creates a wall of earth via their chakra or manipulation of surrounding soil. The wall is created to defend against powerful attacks. The wall is infused with chakra which allows it to take a variety of attacks from enemy ninjutsu.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost:
+ Type: Defense
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 4+ B
+ Effect: Blocks Damage= END X 1.20

APPROVED

Rasengan Jutsu-- (No critique was made to fix this so assume its correct. )

Making new jutsu to replace lava shield.

(4) + - Youton: Molten Core Chakra Mode- >
> User draws in the thermal energy of the ground and infuses it with their chakra-- causing an aura of lava to cloak the caster. Though its chakra manifested, it carries the same durability and intense heat of molten lava. It acts as an armor and weapon for close quarter combat. To use this jutsu makes the user one with the land and heat of the depths of the earth. To attack carelessly against this force will bring one’s own destruction upon them. It is rumored the internal temperature the caster generates from this jutsu is close to the temperature of the earth's mantle-- hotter than any material can withstand.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost: (Upkeep)
+ Type: Offense, Defense, Supplementary.
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 5 (Unique hand sign) + S
+ Effect: STR + END X 1.40 + Taijutsu/Melee base-attacks dealt/received causes MAX burns to enemies + Youton Jutsu damage is increased by X 1.50

x Changes that is too high for an S rank technique they would have to be lowered to be at least to x1.25 As they surpass the powers of several site made techniques. They must stay under that.

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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   May 19th 2017, 22:41

2.[+ - Doton: Seismic Pulse Jutsu - >]
[> Jutsu Description]: By training to the peak of one's potential in Earth-Release, one can become one with the earth and learn to wait and listen. With this jutsu, one's senses become one with the earth below to allow them a powerful sensory ability. By feeling the vibrations in the earth, one can detect hidden enemies and traps with incredible accuracy that sight or sound couldn't reprieve. Its an excellent tool to use against the Silent Mist technique and other combat scenarios that makes sight impossible.
[+ Chakra & Stamina Cost:] < - [Leave Blank] (Upkeep)
[+ Type:] < - [Supplementary]
[+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank:] < - Stomps foot to the ground + C class
[+ Effect] < - User gains full sensory awareness of a 1 kilometer radius around self (no eyesight/sound required) . Negate stealth/concealment/trap jutsu and Stealth Dice =+5 instantly.
[+ Requirements + Restrictions]: Enemies must be in contact with the ground. Levitated/Flight enemies are not detected.
[+ Parent Jutsu:] < - Heightened Senses Ability.
[+ Creator:] Asura Jiin.

HOpe this one is better.

(4) + - Youton: Molten Core Chakra Mode- >
> User draws in the thermal energy of the ground and infuses it with their chakra-- causing an aura of lava to cloak the caster. Though its chakra manifested, it carries the same durability and intense heat of molten lava. It acts as an armor and weapon for close quarter combat. To use this jutsu makes the user one with the land and heat of the depths of the earth. To attack carelessly against this force will bring one’s own destruction upon them. It is rumored the internal temperature the caster generates from this jutsu is close to the temperature of the earth's mantle-- hotter than any material can withstand.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost: (Upkeep)
+ Type: Offense, Defense, Supplementary.
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 5 (Unique hand sign) + S
+ Effect: STR + END X 1.25 + Taijutsu/Melee base-attacks dealt/received causes MAX burns to enemies + Youton Jutsu damage is increased by X 1.25

Okay I put 1.25 . Word of warning though, i got an inferno style chakra mode coming up that is Hi-jutsu later on ideally 1.50 so let me know what happens.


Also, the Rasengan, you didn't say anything about it so ill repost it here. But look to the spoiler sections in previous posts to see it.

5. + - Doton: Rasengan—Torment of Atlas - >
>A Variation of the Rasengan created by a rogue ninja of Iwa. Named after the Titan, Atlas who was said to hold up the very planet on his back through the sea of chaos as punishment for his crimes. Focusing enhanced earth-chakra into the Rasengan, the chakra becomes denser. Pieces of earth orbit around the sphere and it glows with a darkness like black onyx. This deceptive jutsu takes the form of a powerful attack—but its true power comes in its massive gravity it inflicts upon the target. The infused chakra that makes contact will put so much pressure on the enemy, they won’t be able to lift a finger. A truly fearful jutsu, indeed.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost:
+ Type: Offense + Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0+ S+
+ Damage + Effect: 300 + Target’s Nexus Stats reduced by X 0.50 & Target Dice Rolls = 0 for 3 turns.
+ Drawbacks and Restrictions:
+ Parent Jutsu: Rasengan, Doton: Ultimate Lead Body Weight, Doton: Yomi Hasaiki

+ Creator: Asura Jiin

Note: This one may too be a bit too much. Maybe as a custom jutsu but thought I'd give it a try. The 50% debuff might not work but let me know what I can fix up. 25% might be more feasible. But you can see the attempt clearly. A Rasengan version of Doton's finest techniques.

This needs approvbal-- also all the items i made in items.




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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   May 19th 2017, 22:43

That is because it was not posted on the above post that you placed up. I only reviewed the latest post that you posted. I'll go over it once you have done so.


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   May 19th 2017, 22:44

Um, the latest post was corrections made with Grave-- from that first seciton. He and i talked it on skype, so you can check with him Its all part of the first request, and I made the changes so it should be good.


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   May 19th 2017, 22:47

Sorry, about that yeah I have talked with Zaber about the corrections that needed to be taken for them.


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   May 19th 2017, 22:56

If changes are to be made its best to always keep them on the thread. This way if anything that happens while another member reviews this information will not be confused as to why its one thing when it reads something else.

This also helps me review the techniques a bit easier I'm fine if you update them through skype but remember they are still going here so just cause "Grave" said its okay it should always be shown that you say, "Okay so these are my changes with Grave as we spoke and he said, etc etc" By showing a bit of the chat information or history can help in the long run I promise just not too much.

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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   May 19th 2017, 23:00

Let me rephrase. First of all, I can't edit my previous application because after a certtain amount of time, you can't edit it. Its just how this stupid site works.

Second, id love for it to be on here, but neither you or Grave were around so he just poked at it and we discussed approachable changes on skype-- which I reposed said jutsu here. I can't help it if some people are too lazy to come on. We need more attendance to this please.

If you want, ill repost the entire jutsu section, but i have to do all the fucking coding again. I am not asking a lot from you to just go back up to a page at least and see the last formated application. Its all there, but I cannot edit it to make it more acceptable.

ALl the posts after that format are corrections.


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   May 19th 2017, 23:05

Understood its just for future note give me a few and I shall review everything for you.


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   May 19th 2017, 23:06

Thanks-- if there is a way to allow edits easier, see if that can be implimented. but otherwise i gotta keep doing what i done so far to 'change jutsu and make it approvable'


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   May 20th 2017, 00:44

Reposting Jutsu and items YET to be approved. AND you didn't give chakra/stamina costs to approved jutsu!

2.[+ - Doton: Seismic Pulse Jutsu - >]
[> Jutsu Description]: By training to the peak of one's potential in Earth-Release, one can become one with the earth and learn to wait and listen. With this jutsu, one's senses become one with the earth below to allow them a powerful sensory ability. By feeling the vibrations in the earth, one can detect hidden enemies and traps with incredible accuracy that sight or sound couldn't reprieve. Its an excellent tool to use against the Silent Mist technique and other combat scenarios that makes sight impossible.
[+ Chakra & Stamina Cost:] < - [Leave Blank] (Upkeep)
[+ Type:] < - [Supplementary]
[+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank:] < - Stomps foot to the ground + C class
[+ Effect] < - User gains full sensory awareness of a 1 kilometer radius around self (no eyesight/sound required) . Negate stealth/concealment/trap jutsu and Stealth Dice =+5
[+ Requirements + Restrictions]: Enemies must be in contact with the ground. Levitated/Flight enemies are not detected.
[+ Parent Jutsu:] < - Heightened Senses Ability.
[+ Creator:] Asura Jiin.

HOpe this one is better.

(4) + - Youton: Molten Core Chakra Mode- >
> User draws in the thermal energy of the ground and infuses it with their chakra-- causing an aura of lava to cloak the caster. Though its chakra manifested, it carries the same durability and intense heat of molten lava. It acts as an armor and weapon for close quarter combat. To use this jutsu makes the user one with the land and heat of the depths of the earth. To attack carelessly against this force will bring one’s own destruction upon them. It is rumored the internal temperature the caster generates from this jutsu is close to the temperature of the earth's mantle-- hotter than any material can withstand.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost: (Upkeep)
+ Type: Offense, Defense, Supplementary.
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 5 (Unique hand sign) + S
+ Effect: STR + END X 1.25 + Taijutsu/Melee base-attacks dealt/received causes MAX burns to enemies + Youton Jutsu damage is increased by X 1.25




Also, the Rasengan, you didn't say anything about it so ill repost it here. But look to the spoiler sections in previous posts to see it.

5. + - Doton: Rasengan—Torment of Atlas - >
>A Variation of the Rasengan created by a rogue ninja of Iwa. Named after the Titan, Atlas who was said to hold up the very planet on his back through the sea of chaos as punishment for his crimes. Focusing enhanced earth-chakra into the Rasengan, the chakra becomes denser. Pieces of earth orbit around the sphere and it glows with a darkness like black onyx. This deceptive jutsu takes the form of a powerful attack—but its true power comes in its massive gravity it inflicts upon the target. The infused chakra that makes contact will put so much pressure on the enemy, they won’t be able to lift a finger. A truly fearful jutsu, indeed.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost:
+ Type: Offense + Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0+ S+
+ Damage + Effect: 300 + Target’s Nexus Stats reduced by X 0.50 & Target Dice Rolls = 0 for 3 turns.
+ Drawbacks and Restrictions:
+ Parent Jutsu: Rasengan, Doton: Ultimate Lead Body Weight, Doton: Yomi Hasaiki

+ Creator: Asura Jiin

Item Blueprints

1. Jian (Chinese Blade)  
A lithe but agile blade that is 12 inches long. its sleek design and balance allows this to be one of the most agile of blades.
Type: Martial
P. Effect: ----
Effect:  30 Dmg +
(Blue Print: X 2 Ingots + 1 Gem Slot Optional)

2. - Scythe: Flip Blade - >
> Standing with a 12ft pole with two crescent blade on each with each expanding 21in, they are believed to be a tool to be a symbol of “Yin & Yang”
+ Type: Marital
+ P. Effect: ----
+ Damage: 60
(Blue Print:  X 4 Ingots + 3 Gem Slots Optional)

3.Divine Circlet
A small metallic band that is worn over the forehead. Consider a stylish trinket but holds great significance for crafters and monks.
Placement: Head
P. Effect: ---
Blue Print: X1 Ingot + 1 Gem Slot Optional)

4.+ - Mask {Unique Design} - >
> Have a design featured on your mask to make it your very own. Special Ops wear ones that are designed based of animals. However, the mask may be designed however the shopper wants.
+ P. Effect: ---
+ Placement: Face

Blue Print ( X 2  Ingot + 1 Gem Slot Optional)

5. War Mask
A mysterious mask that one wears to obscure their identity and fortified to uphold well in combat! Durable and not easy to break. Someone with something to hide.
P. Effect: ---- + Hide Face.
Placement: Face
Blue Print:  X 2 Ingot + 1 Gem Slot Optional)


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   May 20th 2017, 11:07

2 4 and 5 Are approved buddy, are these for your character or yourself? just remember what i told you about them for being yourself.

Items are good,

The scythe though should be three ingots and 2 Gems 3 is a bit high.


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   May 20th 2017, 12:56

2. - Scythe: Flip Blade - >
> Standing with a 12ft pole with two crescent blade on each with each expanding 21in, they are believed to be a tool to be a symbol of “Yin & Yang”
+ Type: Marital
+ P. Effect: ----
+ Damage: ----- (fixing all of them to be blank due to i know better how it works)
(Blue Print: X 4 Ingots + 2 Gem Slots Optional)

Ty for the others and I will apply AP appropriate. Only 2 of em are Hi jutsu.


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   May 21st 2017, 08:39

Scythe is good btw.


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   May 21st 2017, 09:43

Sesisme Pulse - 225 | 79

Molten Core - 500 | 325 {325 | 211}

Rasengan - [Never Place S+] 520 | 338

Mud Wall - [310 | 140]

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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   May 21st 2017, 09:47

Due to also, because of some confusion on the occupation section of the job, always remember you have to write a post of you creating these items on the days you work. So here is everything that is owed because I know you have been working on them for a few weeks now.

Paycheck 1750 x Weeks (3) = 5250 x5% Bonus (waiting for Approvals) = 5513

Please note this will be the ONLY time this will be done afterwards if the work isn't done then nothing will happen nor will you gain anything from this.


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   May 21st 2017, 11:57

undderstood and all added. Ty for your patience with me guys.


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   May 30th 2017, 00:02

Jutsu and Items for Review (Post for Blacksmithing will be done tomorrow on Tuesday) . Selling Jutsu 2 to site. The rest please evaluate. Personal Sage mode included.

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