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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   May 30th 2017, 00:02

Jutsu and Items for Review (Post for Blacksmithing will be done tomorrow on Tuesday) . Selling Jutsu 2 to site. The rest please evaluate. Personal Sage mode included.

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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   June 2nd 2017, 10:39

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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   June 6th 2017, 20:14

Senpou: Youton—Magma Tsunami! (For Site or Character?
- Needs to be a Fuinjutsu if its going to seal. You have Ninjutsu Class correct?
- Needs Costs
- Needs AP Cost (If for Character.)

Shouton: Jade Star Shuriken (For Site or Character?)
- Good just needs to have Costs
- Needs AP Cost (If for character.)

Hei Hu Quan: Tiger Kumite Style
- Good
- Needs AP Cost

War God's Fists-- One thousand Blows
- Good
- Type should be offensive
- Cost is needed.
- Needs AP Cost

Sage Art: Shouton --- Jade Tiger Statues
- Cannot be done, As Nature Energy does not stay collected, it vanishes or diminishes over time or at the end of battle, as it was stated it cannot be collected before a battle for any reason.
- Its best to remove the % and have it use the Nature Scale.
- Needs AP Cost1.

Royal Tiger Claw
- Good


2. Cloth-Scroll Wristband
- Good, but may wanna have it read not cloth.

3.Chained Hammer
- Good, only 1 Gem Slot


4.Triple Blade Scythe
- Good

5.+ - Reinforced Bow - >
- Good, Lower Ingots cost to -2 Ingots
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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   June 6th 2017, 21:54

Changes made here. Please look in spoilers to see them.

Magma Tsunami-- Yes, Asura has the sealing seed. The concept for this is simple. The power of Nature Energy laced into the earth, will naturally form a seal on its own accord. Even though Asura has some sealing knowlege, he doesn't have the aptitutde to do advance onces yet like the 4th hokage and other sealing users. However, applying nature energy to a traditional magma release seemed like a cool idea to justify a seal-- at least to contain something/someone trapped under the molten rock if should they survive.

Jade Star Shuriken-- yes selling to site.

Style and all other requested Hijutsu had APp added, and glad to know I can just spitball costs here from now on.

As for Jade Tiger Statues--- well I'd like to get a full review of this. My goal was to make a new way of gathering nature energy that wasn't a simple 'Clone" method, which is stupid.

My reasons-- 1, Sage Chakra infused Crystal would be able to collect and store nature energy due to the simple fact they are-- indeed-- statues and do not move on their own. The structure of the crystal, the chakra infused, and structure would allow this slow but steady flow and gather. (I am explaining this for Omni since we discussed it on skype earlier, Grave).

Anyway i still wanna use it if we can work out an alternative way to use them to gather nature energy?

Otherwise either approve the rest regarding their costs.


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   June 7th 2017, 18:11

All's good then expect for the Jade Tiger statues one until we get further results or conformation on it.
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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   June 7th 2017, 22:14

ALright. all approved-- I will just come back to the Jade Statue idea later.


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   June 10th 2017, 11:22

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Another batch of jutsu and items to create and review please. No selling-- just Hi jutsu.

Also added another item I hope no one minds if I make 6? ONly cause i realized how great it could be after seeing a pic of it.

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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   June 14th 2017, 14:25

Bump-- please


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   June 17th 2017, 21:58

After discussion with Grave on Skype, updated Jutsu list and items.

Remember, the effects of Symbiosis work by selecting only a maximum of 2 to use, and each one count as an action. Not all of them can be used at the same time. Also ideally i want that medical genjutsu removal to be more effective for combat?

Got rid of Trick Room since i don't understand Genjutsu clearly.

ALso since Space+Time Jutsu cannot have more than 3 abilities , making a 6th jutsu to add the ones I need. please pardon me. And correct if wrong but the idea of 3 abilities limited to Time-space seems stupid. ALso please confirm if the Jutsu Must state instant travel for its abilities , or can I just assume and not bother for its effects. Please state it here for the rules.

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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   June 25th 2017, 20:25

For the sake of space and time , gonna post up only the unapproved jutsu here.

1.+ - Katon/Enton to Shounetsuton - >
> This allows those who have awakened the power of Shounetsuton to convert Katon, even Enton jutsu into Shounetsuton. As a result, the previous jutsu are given new life and power by paying extra in chakra. Jutsu enhanced by Shounetsuton become unparalleled in power. The flames of life are drawn to the physical energy of the target, driven to burn them to ashes.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost: Katon/Enton Drain x1.25
+ Type: Offensive
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: +1 of Katon's & "?"
+ Damage + Effect: (DMG = Targets Stamina ) is added to enhanced Jutsu's damage. + Burn Status HP Drain is increased by X1.50
+SP. Effect: If user has the Tengan active, DMG = Target's MAX Stamina instead + Burn Status cannot be negated.
+Parent Jutsu : " Katon to Enton " by Hayabusa Uchiha.
+Created by: "Asura Jiin"
AP Cost: 700

2.Yang Release Seal: Heavenly Sun Rejuvenation.
> A seal normally invisible but positioned over the heart of the body in the shape of a tribal sun. It appears when triggered. The overflow of life energy that radiates from Yang Release chakra rejuvenates the person after suffering catastrophic injury, either by an enemy or by overexertion of the own body. However, one who has Yang Release chakra within them, can never be killed by conventional methods, which grants the bearer of the mark eternal youth and immortality.
Chakra & Stamina Cost : 500 & 275 (to cast). Releasing the seal costs none.
Hand Seals & Rank: 4 + S
Seal Type: Even
Effect: Restores all nexus stats , HP, chakra control and status conditions to 100%. Includes Sage Mode and Inner Gate 'near death state'.

No, because that would cause the forms to be broken and the only time the side effects of those were even avoid was during the movie Bonds for Inner Gates and Six Paths wearing off during the battle with Sasuke and Naruto but either or he was still running out of chakra
Sp. Passive Effect: Possessing Yang Release = Target user cannot age beyond their mid-20s and are Immortal.
Restrictions & Requirement: Must have 100% Yang Release Mastery. May be cast on another person-- but will fade after one use unless user has Yang Element. Unable to use after activation for 1 month IRL. Can only be undo/broken if user has yang Release/Yin-yang release.
Ap Cost: 600

Jutsu for Vidav---
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+ - Tiger Eyes' Hypnotism - >
> Vidav glares into an opponent's eyes and plunges his will deep into his victim's mind. Target becomes hypnotized by the caster, unable to resist his will and do his bidding. The eyes of the tiger intimidates even the most brave. Even as the victim is hypnotized, Vidav is deeply connected to the mental state of the victim, able to read his mind effectively to determine the truth. This jutsu may also be used to interrupt the Genjutsu of another enemy, saving an ally.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost: 460 & 253
+ Contact + Type: Sight /Touch + Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 1 + S
+ Effect: Hypnotizes target = Caster can control actions of opponent in place of his own for a grand total of 5 turns. + Target must answer all questions truthfully. (Paralysis. Target must answer all questions truthfully-- that they are conscious of.)  |  Negate effect of 1 S class Genjutsu on an ally.
+ Restrictions and Drawbacks:

++ - Suiton: Mirror World Phantasm - >
> Using Suiton, Vidav creates a large mirror which reflects the image of the caster that looks into it. In response, creates a mirror clone of the caster. This mystic mirror copies the opponent down to the last detail, as well as the jutsu they control. This jutsu forces an opponent to attack themselves, which also results in damage to the enemy's mind.  
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost: 500 & 325
+ Contact + Type: Sight + Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 1 + S
+ Effect: Creates a full identical clone of opponent. Opponent Actions = Auto Blocked. Clone will counter each attack original uses with its own jutsu. Each time a Jutsu is countered and dispelled-- opponent's mind Gauge is reduced -15% each attack.
+ Limit: 4.
+ Restrictions and Drawbacks: Block can only work on Melee, Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Bukotsujutsu.

+ - Medical Ninjutsu: Symbiosis-
> Similar to the puppet technique, Vidav uses chakra threads to connect to an ally. However, unlike traditional strings meant to manipulate targets, these strings add an extension that interacts with the attached parties circulatory system, nervous system and chakra network. Through this method, not only is one able to transfer charka, but able to influence their allies chakra nature from a distance. The applications for this technique are varied, including transferring and sharing chakra, removing Genjutsu from allies, but also using another's body and senses to cast Genjutsu on an enemy, making it harder to avoid or counter.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost (Upkeep): 500 & 325 (325 & 211)
+ Type: Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 1 + S rank
+ Effect: Chakra and resources between Summon and Summoner is now shared. + Also the two are aware of both's surroundings through partially shared senses and gain telepathy between them. + While upkeep is paid, the following abilities may be used once for actions.

Mind Gauge = 100% + Negate up to S Rank Genjutsu
Heals X1.30 HP + Remove 1 Status Condition. > Trade HP or 1 Status Condition to other.
Transfer Genjutsu Contact type from one user to another.
Recovers X1.20% of stamina + -1 Stress > Trade Stamina w/o Stress


+ Restrictions and Drawbacks: Only Maximum of 2 of the above options can be used per turn. Options takes a separate action to trigger. + While Symbiosis is active, the caster cannot cast any other jutsu during its duration. + Reactions used by Vidav causes the jutsu to break, and must be recast if to be used again.

(Redoing this jutsu now that I understand the effects per rank)
5.+ - Sacred Tiger Claws- - > Shinsei Tora no Tsume

> A sacred jutsu bound to the weapons of the Tigers. Their claws always tore their enemies to shreds, and now too can they use them to rend through space itself. By slashing at a pocket of space, one may tear through reality and cross space through the claw-shaped slash. The tears can be used for multiple purposes from fast-travel teleportation to evading enemy attacks by cutting a portal via the claws. With careful placement and proper control, one can use the portals to bypass enemy defenses or redirect an enemy's attack. One must have a clear location/idea in mind of where each tear in space occurs.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost: 400 & 260  > Lvl 2.= X 1.15 cost.
+ Type: Defense, Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0 + ?
+ Effect: Instant Travel (May travel with 1 extra person through portal/contact) | User evade All Enemy Actions
+ Lvl 2: Reflect 1 Enemy Attack against new target | 1 Action = Can’t be blocked/reflected.
+ Requirement & Restriction: Jikku Manipulation Knowledge + Must have “Tiger Claw” Weapon Equipt, forged from Shinkoku territory.
+Creator: Asura Jiin
AP Cost: 700

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6. Kunai Tuning Fork
An oddly made two prong kunai. It is not ideal for combat, but is capable of dealing a blow when needed. However, its more unique feature comes from its constitution of the metal. When struck, the sound it produces is clear and reacts on a high-level pitch that is almost not audible for animals' hearing. It is proven as a great tool for those who value the use of Genjutsu.
Type: Ninja Tool.
Damage: _____ + Sound Base Genjutsu cannot be blocked by earplugs.
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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   July 2nd 2017, 12:26

Rewriting Yang Seal-- changes made after talk on Discord.

2.Yang Release Seal: Heavenly Sun Rejuvenation.
> A seal normally invisible but positioned over the heart of the body in the shape of a tribal sun. It appears when triggered. The overflow of life energy that radiates from Yang Release chakra rejuvenates the person after suffering catastrophic injury, either by an enemy or by overexertion of the own body. However, one who has Yang Release chakra within them, can never age beyond a certain point. They gain eternal youth and infinite longevity.
Chakra & Stamina Cost : 500 & 275 (to cast). Releasing the seal costs none.
Hand Seals & Rank: 4 + S
Seal Type: Even
Effect: Restores all nexus stats , HP, Chakra Control and status conditions to 100%.(Excludes Near Death State)

Sp. Passive Effect: Possess Yang Release = Target user cannot age beyond their mid-20s and have infinite longevity. + Adds +3 to Mantra Inner Gates limits.
Restrictions & Requirement: May be cast on another person-- but will fade after one use unless user has Yang Release Element. Unable to use after activation for 1 month IRL. Can only be undo/broken if user has yang Release/Yin-yang release.
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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   July 2nd 2017, 14:02

Katon/Enton Jutsu, Yang Seal Heaven Sun Rejuvenation, Scared Tiger Claws
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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   July 4th 2017, 16:08

The following is me rewriting Vidav summoning jutsu that still needs approving. Now that i understand the limit of S class, i hope this works. Symbiosis i changed to only use one of the selective effects seperated from actions, but now using 1, not 2 out of them. Also chakra upkeep cost is paid by both-- each paying half of the cost to maintain the connection. ANd symbiosis now justified by the caster cannot use other jutsu, so defense of the caster requires aid of the summoner. If that isn't Symbiotic, then what the fuck is?



+ - Tiger Eyes' Hypnotism - >
> Vidav glares into an opponent's eyes and plunges his will deep into his victim's mind. Target becomes hypnotized by the caster, unable to resist his will and do his bidding. The eyes of the tiger intimidates even the most brave. Even as the victim is hypnotized, Vidav is deeply connected to the mental state of the victim, able to read his mind effectively to determine the truth. This jutsu may also be used to interrupt the Genjutsu of another enemy, saving an ally.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost: 460 & 253
+ Contact + Type: Sight /Touch + Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 1 + S
+ Effect: Hypnotizes target = Caster can control actions of opponent in place of his own for a grand total of 5 turns. + Target must answer all questions truthfully. (Paralysis. Target must answer all questions truthfully-- that they are conscious of.)  |  Negate effect of 1 S class Genjutsu on an ally.
+ Restrictions and Drawbacks:

+ - Suiton: Mirror World Phantasm - >
> Using Suiton, Vidav creates a large mirror which reflects the image of the target that looks into it. In response, creates a mirror clone of the caster. This mystic mirror copies the opponent down to the last detail, as well as the jutsu they control. This jutsu forces an opponent to attack themselves, which also results in damage to the enemy's mind.  
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost: 500 & 325
+ Contact + Type: Sight/Touch + Defense/ Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 1 + S
+ Effect: Creates a full identical clone of opponent and Opponent Actions = Auto Blocked by mimicking enemy's jutsu/attack exactly. + Each time a Jutsu is blocked/countered, opponent's mind Gauge is reduced -15% each attack.
+ Limit: 4.
+ Restrictions and Drawbacks: Block can only work on Melee, Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Bukijutsu.

+ - Medical Ninjutsu: Symbiosis
> Similar to the puppet technique, Vidav uses chakra threads to connect to an ally. However, unlike traditional strings meant to manipulate targets, these strings add an extension that interacts with the attached parties circulatory system, nervous system and chakra network. Through this method, not only is one able to transfer charka, but able to influence their allies chakra nature from a distance. The applications for this technique are varied, including healing wounds, removing Genjutsu from allies, but also using another's body and senses to cast Genjutsu on an enemy, making it harder to avoid or counter. However, this jutsu requires great concentration and the caster is unable to use other jutsu to maintain this connection-- leaving protection of the caster up to the summoner who summoned Vidav.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost (Upkeep): 500 & 325 (325 & 211)
Note: Summon and summoner pays half for upkeep between them to maintain jutsu.
+ Type: Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 1 + S rank
+ Effect: Vidav and the attached target is aware of both's surroundings through partially shared senses and gain telepathy between them. + While upkeep is paid, the following abilities may be used once for actions:

  • Mind Gauge = 100% + Negate up to S Rank Genjutsu
  • Heals X1.30 HP + Remove 1 Status Condition.
  • Transfer Genjutsu Contact type from one user to another.
  • Regenerates X1.30 Stamina to target + removes -3 stress from target.



+ Restrictions and Drawbacks: While Symbiosis is active, the caster cannot cast any other jutsu during its duration. To recast, they must pay the original cost all over again. + Only Maximum of 1 of the above options can be used per turn separated from actions.


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   July 6th 2017, 18:44

Lower Tiger Hypnosis to 3 Turns

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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   July 6th 2017, 19:20

+ - Tiger Eyes' Hypnotism - >
> Vidav glares into an opponent's eyes and plunges his will deep into his victim's mind. Target becomes hypnotized by the caster, unable to resist his will and do his bidding. The eyes of the tiger intimidates even the most brave. Even as the victim is hypnotized, Vidav is deeply connected to the mental state of the victim, able to read his mind effectively to determine the truth. This jutsu may also be used to interrupt the Genjutsu of another enemy, saving an ally.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost: 460 & 253
+ Contact + Type: Sight /Touch + Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 1 + S
+ Effect: Hypnotizes target = Caster can control actions of opponent in place of his own for a grand total of 3 turns. + Target must answer all questions truthfully. (Paralysis. Target must answer all questions truthfully-- that they are conscious of.) | Negate effect of 1 S class Genjutsu on an ally.
+ Restrictions and Drawbacks:


Fixed and done-- ty Omni!


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   July 7th 2017, 11:37

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Also know-- the Taiyou Chakra Modes in here, I am trying to follow the new rule but give the new jutsu a power to be added to the first. If possible great-- if not, lets try to slowly work it out. Thank you.

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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   July 12th 2017, 22:31

Bump . please go over


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   July 16th 2017, 19:20

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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   July 17th 2017, 16:59

>_> Really...I should just let it be I told you I was in a lot of pain and I'd post up as soon as I could what needed to be worked.

4.< - Shounetsuton : Yoake Mandara - Dawn Mandala >
> Combining the power of Inferno Release with change in chakra-form, the caster molds the white flames to form a wide-area pattern along the ground. Upon activation, the flames erupt outward and take on solid shape around the caster. The shape and power creates a protective space that blocks incoming attacks from all sides, using an enemy’s own physical energy against them. From the ground, it appears to look like a strange white lotus flower—from the air, it forms a perfect geometric pattern that is a holy symbol of a mythic empire.
> + Chakra & Stamina Cost: 425 & 230
+ Type: Defense + Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 4 + A
+ Effects: Blocks All DMG = Attacker’s MAX Stamina. + If Attacker’s Damage is lower than their Max Stamina, difference is reflected at them as damage OR difference added to defending user’s stamina.
+ Drawback:
+ AP: 500

1. wtf?! If it blocks all Damage to my MAX stamina, then it be fine, BUT if my attack damage is lower than my stamina it be pointless, cause then it bounces back my END would cover the difference. But at the same time if my damage is being blocked by again "MY" stamina then how are you taking the difference and adding it to you if you bounced it back at me?!?!

5.+ - Shouton: Jade Soul Prism - >
> The caster creates a solid barrier of super-dense crystal fused together with chakra that surrounds himself or an ally. Forming a solid crystal-- its laced with chakra to prevent penetration from enemy forces. An impregnable defense. While inside the crystal, however, the crystal has an unique property that draws in and magnifies Nature Energy-- similar to how a prism focuses and refracts light.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost: 400 & 220
+ Type: Defense + Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 3 + A
+ Effect: Target protected is untargetable inside crystal. Blocking = Caster's END (X2.0) and can't be destroyed unless taking +3000 DMG + Immune to Piercing status/Auto destroy barrier jutsu.
+ Sp. Effect: If target inside crystal absorbs N.E., instead of 80 NE per absorption, it becomes 20% Max NE.
+Restrictions & Requirements: Cannot be destroyed till damage exceeds blocking power (Remains active till broken).
AP: 500

1. Blocking can equal Caster's END x2 which is fine, however the damage it can block is also how strong the barrier would be so +3000 DMG would not be needed. Also it would not be able to stop piercing damage or auto destroy things because one if one is able to pierce through the barrier which again is still END they could. Like Chidori cutting through a door, BUT I do not see a problem with it, because again the barrier can be destroyed.

2.+ Sp. Effect: If target inside crystal absorbs N.E., instead of 80 NE per absorption, it becomes 20% Max NE. Change that....to while inside, NE Absorption Per turn is 25% Max NE.
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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   July 17th 2017, 18:24

OKay got rid of jutsu damage reflection.

< - Shounetsuton : Yoake Mandara - Dawn Mandala >
> Combining the power of Inferno Release with change in chakra-form, the caster molds the white flames to form a wide-area pattern along the ground. Upon activation, the flames erupt outward and take on solid shape around the caster. The shape and power creates a protective space that blocks incoming attacks from all sides, using an enemy’s own physical energy against them. From the ground, it appears to look like a strange white lotus flower—from the air, it forms a perfect geometric pattern that is a holy symbol of a mythic empire.
> + Chakra & Stamina Cost: 425 & 230
+ Type: Defense + Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 4 + A
+ Effects: Blocks All DMG = Attacker’s MAX Stamina. + If Attacker’s Damage is lower than their Max Stamina, difference is added to defending user’s stamina.
+ Drawback:
+ AP: 500

5.+ - Shouton: Jade Soul Prism - >
> The caster creates a solid barrier of super-dense crystal fused together with chakra that surrounds himself or an ally. Forming a solid crystal-- its laced with chakra to prevent penetration from enemy forces. An impregnable defense. While inside the crystal, however, the crystal has an unique property that draws in and magnifies Nature Energy-- similar to how a prism focuses and refracts light.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost: 400 & 220
+ Type: Defense + Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 3 + A
+ Effect: Target protected is untargetable inside crystal (Crystal must be broken first to attack enemy). Blocking = Caster's END (X2.0) + Piercing status = Breaks Barrier only (separate action) .
+ Sp. Effect: If target inside crystal absorbs N.E., instead of 80 NE per absorption, it becomes 25% Max NE.
+Restrictions & Requirements: Cannot be destroyed till damage exceeds blocking power (Remains active till broken).
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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   July 19th 2017, 18:41

Very well designed techniques, I shall allow them.


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   July 19th 2017, 18:41

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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   July 22nd 2017, 17:59

Sellling Jutsu number 4 to site. Rest are Hijutsu. Also made items in below section. Number 3 is a bit extreme and willing to make it consume all slots if not allowed but let me know if its possible or not.

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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   July 29th 2017, 23:36

1. + - Yoton: Hikari Kage Bunshin No Jutsu - Shining Shadow Clone Jutsu - > Shadow Clones to not have 100% of a characters Base Attributes that would have to be lowered to be 25%, as well the Clones HP = their Chakra no matter what cause if they take damage they would vanish so they would not matter having a HP bar.
> Using the power of Yang Release, fully realized how it reflects the physical life force of a person, Asura had adapted the same elemental power into the Shadow Clone jutsu. As a result, his clones become so developed, it is impossible to tell them apart from the original. Even a doujutsu can't distinguish the real from the fake. The clones possess the same physical traits and strengths of the original. However, the caster cannot create as many clones as to the traditional shadow clone technique.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost: "X" Chakra / [# Clones] & Chakra Cost x.45
+ Type: Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 1 + A
+ Effect: Clones = 100% Base (Nexus Attributes) + Chakra X 2= HP + ["X" Chakra] Split evenly among clones + -1 Action = -1 to 10 Clones to Counter Action. Max: 20 Clones
Creator: Asura Jiin
AP: 500

2.+ - Sacred Spring - Ripple Punch - >
> A series of punches delivered by one who is proficient in both body and mind. By awakening the second gate of Svadhishthana , one's focus becomes as fluent and adaptive as water. By performing a series of punches in key points in the body, one can not only able to damage, but cripple an opponent's movement and strength.
+ Stamina Cost: 200
+ Type: Offensive
+ Rank: C
+ Damage + Effect: 120 + Enemy (Nexus stat of choice) reduced by X.20 (This is stack-able)
+ Drawback: - - None - -
+ Requirements: Must have Second True Mantra gate, Svadhishthana active. + Knowledge of Medical Ninjutsu for pressure points in body.
+Created by: Asura Jiin
AP: 300

3.< - Shounetsuton : Shin Amateratsu - True Goddess of the Sun >
> After studying the powers of Amateratsu of the Uchiha, Asura had adapted the same legendary jutsu into his own power of Inferno Release. Using the flames that could even consume Amateratsu, he has evolved it into the true brilliance that the name defines. The flames of Shounetsuton is the true fires of creation, that puts the Uchiha’s use of the name to shame. It emerges the same flash of flame on target’s sight but burns with a stronger purity. It also is said, when confronted with its ‘adversary’ jutsu, it grows even stronger in retaliation.
> + Chakra & Stamina Cost: 500 & 350
+ Type: Offense
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0 + S
+ Effects: Damage = Target’s Max Stamina + -50 HP per turn. < Be advice wise its not a bad idea but since you are performing the attack why not have its damage equal to your stamina?
+Sp. Effect: If used to counter “Amateratsu”, an “Amateratsu” parent jutsu or Blaze Release jutsu, Damage is increased by X1.50 and does direct damage. (Dice roll reflected on enemy's roll for counter action.)
+Requirements and Restrictions: Tengan active to use.
+Created by: Asura Jiin
+AP: 600

4. + - Rocket Uppercut - > <- This could honestly be a D Rank or even lower to save up on cost of Stamina.
> A great forces backs the fist of the fighter as he pushes all his energy into a drive forward. Once at the right angle, he drives his whole body up to deliver a powerful upper-cut that strikes the opponenet's jaw. The blow is so fast and powerful, it is known to launch people clear into the air.
+ Stamina Cost: 200
+ Type: Offensive
+ Rank: C
+ Damage + Effect: 180 + Airborne status
+ Drawback: +1 Stress

5 . + - Yoton: Yoake Rasengan - Dawn Spiraling Sphere - >
> A version of the Rasengan transformed by the life-defining properties of Yang Release. The sphere bright light becomes even brighter and almost pure white in appearance. The physically manifested chakra of the famous jutsu is adapted to manifest the physical energy of the caster. The jutsu compresses so much energy, if released, it can be transformed into a massive beam of chakra that can decimate an opponent from far range--viewable from afar similar to a sunrise.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost: 460 & 252
+ Type: Offensive
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0 + A
+ Damage: Damage = (User's Stamina + HP) + Damage dealt against enemy's original End (negate status boost).
+Conditions and Restrictions: To Flow Chakra raise in End does not get negated.
+Created by: Asura Jiin
AP: 600


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   July 31st 2017, 10:59

Thank you for coming back to this-- A few questions.

Reason I did the Yang release clones for 100% nexus stats, because I thought being about the physical side of things, I thought clones with the full physical attributes of the caster would be doable. You are sure this wont work? If not, ill scrap the idea ><

As for Shin Amateratsu-- well my understanding is that Inferno Release for damage is solely reflected upon enemy's physical energy right? ALl the other inferno release on site do damage by enemy's physical energy? Why would you want me to make it my own instead? I could do it, but when facing a stronger enemy than myself, that would be more better? Could you explain your reasoning before I change it?

I assume the rests are okay that you did not comment on. But let me know if any changes. Only thing i need to confirm is the clone idea and the Shin Amateratsu.

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2.+ - Sacred Spring - Ripple Punch - >
> A series of punches delivered by one who is proficient in both body and mind. By awakening the second gate of Svadhishthana , one's focus becomes as fluent and adaptive as water. By performing a series of punches in key points in the body, one can not only able to damage, but cripple an opponent's movement and strength.
+ Stamina Cost: 200
+ Type: Offensive
+ Rank: C
+ Damage + Effect: 120 + Enemy (Nexus stat of choice) reduced by X.20 (This is stack-able)
+ Drawback: - - None - -
+ Requirements: Must have Second True Mantra gate, Svadhishthana active. + Knowledge of Medical Ninjutsu for pressure points in body.
+Created by: Asura Jiin
AP: 300

3.< - Shounetsuton : Shin Amateratsu - True Goddess of the Sun >
> After studying the powers of Amateratsu of the Uchiha, Asura had adapted the same legendary jutsu into his own power of Inferno Release. Using the flames that could even consume Amateratsu, he has evolved it into the true brilliance that the name defines. The flames of Shounetsuton is the true fires of creation, that puts the Uchiha’s use of the name to shame. It emerges the same flash of flame on target’s sight but burns with a stronger purity. It also is said, when confronted with its ‘adversary’ jutsu, it grows even stronger in retaliation.
> + Chakra & Stamina Cost: 500 & 350
+ Type: Offense
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0 + S
+ Effects: Damage = Target’s Max Stamina + -50 HP per turn. < Be advice wise its not a bad idea but since you are performing the attack why not have its damage equal to your stamina?
+Sp. Effect: If used to counter “Amateratsu”, an “Amateratsu” parent jutsu or Blaze Release jutsu, Damage is increased by X1.50 and does direct damage. (Dice roll reflected on enemy's roll for counter action.)
+Requirements and Restrictions: Tengan active to use.
+Created by: Asura Jiin
+AP: 600

4. + - Rocket Uppercut - >
> A great forces backs the fist of the fighter as he pushes all his energy into a drive forward. Once at the right angle, he drives his whole body up to deliver a powerful upper-cut that strikes the opponenet's jaw. The blow is so fast and powerful, it is known to launch people clear into the air.
+ Stamina Cost: 120
+ Type: Offensive
+ Rank: D
+ Damage + Effect: 180 + Airborne status
+ Drawback: +1 Stress

5 . + - Yoton: Yoake Rasengan - Dawn Spiraling Sphere - >
> A version of the Rasengan transformed by the life-defining properties of Yang Release. The sphere bright light becomes even brighter and almost pure white in appearance. The physically manifested chakra of the famous jutsu is adapted to manifest the physical energy of the caster. The jutsu compresses so much energy, if released, it can be transformed into a massive beam of chakra that can decimate an opponent from far range--viewable from afar similar to a sunrise.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost: 460 & 252
+ Type: Offensive
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0 + A
+ Damage: Damage = (User's Stamina + HP) + Damage dealt against enemy's original End (negate status boost).
+Conditions and Restrictions: To Flow Chakra raise in End does not get negated.
+Created by: Asura Jiin
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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   July 31st 2017, 11:28

Also don't forget my blue prints please ><


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   July 31st 2017, 12:25

With them having a physical element being used on to them I wouldn't allow them to even hit higher than the regular shadow clones, as again its just a shadow of that element when having an element coming into play. So they may get a boost to where not 100% but like another 15% is added onto their attributes using the base effect of the actual shadow clone technique.

Reason for the advice of having it strike your opponent using your max stamina, as youre performing the attack who's to say that an enemy is going to have higher stamina to which you perform this technique and they have something to heal when taking damage or gain something back that is equal to the damage they are getting?

So that could leave you in a hole with you helping them in the end instead of helping yourself.


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   July 31st 2017, 12:53

1, sorry about the message on PM but i digress.

2-- okay so Ill scrap the clone idea and come back to it some other time.

As for the Shin Amateratsu, I understand your point of view. I never thought that would happen when the jutsu is based on an enemy's stats. Anyway Ill use that then. Thanks.

3.< - Shounetsuton : Shin Amateratsu - True Goddess of the Sun >
> After studying the powers of Amateratsu of the Uchiha, Asura had adapted the same legendary jutsu into his own power of Inferno Release. Using the flames that could even consume Amateratsu, he has evolved it into the true brilliance that the name defines. The flames of Shounetsuton is the true fires of creation, that puts the Uchiha’s use of the name to shame. It emerges the same flash of flame on target’s sight but burns with a stronger purity. It also is said, when confronted with its ‘adversary’ jutsu, it grows even stronger in retaliation.
> + Chakra & Stamina Cost: 500 & 350
+ Type: Offense
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0 + S
+ Effects: Damage = Caster's Max Stamina + -50 HP per turn.
+Sp. Effect: If used to counter “Amateratsu”, an “Amateratsu” parent jutsu or Blaze Release jutsu, Damage is increased by X1.50 and does direct damage. (Dice roll reflected on enemy's roll for counter action.)
+Requirements and Restrictions: Tengan active to use.
+Created by: Asura Jiin
+AP: 600

Let me know if its all cool now.


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   August 3rd 2017, 16:32

Awesome job, I'll be reviewing over the Blueprints tonight for sure as I'm also working on a few other things tonight.


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   August 6th 2017, 11:00

Okay, ill await the blueprints please.


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