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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   May 30th 2017, 00:02

Jutsu and Items for Review (Post for Blacksmithing will be done tomorrow on Tuesday) . Selling Jutsu 2 to site. The rest please evaluate. Personal Sage mode included.

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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   June 2nd 2017, 10:39

bump. please look


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   June 6th 2017, 20:14

Senpou: Youton—Magma Tsunami! (For Site or Character?
- Needs to be a Fuinjutsu if its going to seal. You have Ninjutsu Class correct?
- Needs Costs
- Needs AP Cost (If for Character.)

Shouton: Jade Star Shuriken (For Site or Character?)
- Good just needs to have Costs
- Needs AP Cost (If for character.)

Hei Hu Quan: Tiger Kumite Style
- Good
- Needs AP Cost

War God's Fists-- One thousand Blows
- Good
- Type should be offensive
- Cost is needed.
- Needs AP Cost

Sage Art: Shouton --- Jade Tiger Statues
- Cannot be done, As Nature Energy does not stay collected, it vanishes or diminishes over time or at the end of battle, as it was stated it cannot be collected before a battle for any reason.
- Its best to remove the % and have it use the Nature Scale.
- Needs AP Cost1.

Royal Tiger Claw
- Good


2. Cloth-Scroll Wristband
- Good, but may wanna have it read not cloth.

3.Chained Hammer
- Good, only 1 Gem Slot


4.Triple Blade Scythe
- Good

5.+ - Reinforced Bow - >
- Good, Lower Ingots cost to -2 Ingots


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   June 6th 2017, 21:54

Changes made here. Please look in spoilers to see them.

Magma Tsunami-- Yes, Asura has the sealing seed. The concept for this is simple. The power of Nature Energy laced into the earth, will naturally form a seal on its own accord. Even though Asura has some sealing knowlege, he doesn't have the aptitutde to do advance onces yet like the 4th hokage and other sealing users. However, applying nature energy to a traditional magma release seemed like a cool idea to justify a seal-- at least to contain something/someone trapped under the molten rock if should they survive.

Jade Star Shuriken-- yes selling to site.

Style and all other requested Hijutsu had APp added, and glad to know I can just spitball costs here from now on.

As for Jade Tiger Statues--- well I'd like to get a full review of this. My goal was to make a new way of gathering nature energy that wasn't a simple 'Clone" method, which is stupid.

My reasons-- 1, Sage Chakra infused Crystal would be able to collect and store nature energy due to the simple fact they are-- indeed-- statues and do not move on their own. The structure of the crystal, the chakra infused, and structure would allow this slow but steady flow and gather. (I am explaining this for Omni since we discussed it on skype earlier, Grave).

Anyway i still wanna use it if we can work out an alternative way to use them to gather nature energy?

Otherwise either approve the rest regarding their costs.


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   June 7th 2017, 18:11

All's good then expect for the Jade Tiger statues one until we get further results or conformation on it.


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   June 7th 2017, 22:14

ALright. all approved-- I will just come back to the Jade Statue idea later.


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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   June 10th 2017, 11:22

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Another batch of jutsu and items to create and review please. No selling-- just Hi jutsu.

Also added another item I hope no one minds if I make 6? ONly cause i realized how great it could be after seeing a pic of it.

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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   June 14th 2017, 14:25

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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   June 17th 2017, 21:58

After discussion with Grave on Skype, updated Jutsu list and items.

Remember, the effects of Symbiosis work by selecting only a maximum of 2 to use, and each one count as an action. Not all of them can be used at the same time. Also ideally i want that medical genjutsu removal to be more effective for combat?

Got rid of Trick Room since i don't understand Genjutsu clearly.

ALso since Space+Time Jutsu cannot have more than 3 abilities , making a 6th jutsu to add the ones I need. please pardon me. And correct if wrong but the idea of 3 abilities limited to Time-space seems stupid. ALso please confirm if the Jutsu Must state instant travel for its abilities , or can I just assume and not bother for its effects. Please state it here for the rules.

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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   June 23rd 2017, 19:41

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PostSubject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests   June 25th 2017, 20:25

For the sake of space and time , gonna post up only the unapproved jutsu here.

1.+ - Katon/Enton to Shounetsuton - >
> This allows those who have awakened the power of Shounetsuton to convert Katon, even Enton jutsu into Shounetsuton. As a result, the previous jutsu are given new life and power by paying extra in chakra. Jutsu enhanced by Shounetsuton become unparalleled in power. The flames of life are drawn to the physical energy of the target, driven to burn them to ashes.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost: Katon/Enton Drain x1.25
+ Type: Offensive
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: +1 of Katon's & "?"
+ Damage + Effect: (DMG = Targets Stamina ) is added to enhanced Jutsu's damage. + Burn Status HP Drain is increased by X1.50
+SP. Effect: If user has the Tengan active, DMG = Target's MAX Stamina instead + Burn Status cannot be negated.
+Parent Jutsu : " Katon to Enton " by Hayabusa Uchiha.
+Created by: "Asura Jiin"
AP Cost: 700

2.Yang Release Seal: Heavenly Sun Rejuvenation.
> A seal normally invisible but positioned over the heart of the body in the shape of a tribal sun. It appears when triggered. The overflow of life energy that radiates from Yang Release chakra rejuvenates the person after suffering catastrophic injury, either by an enemy or by overexertion of the own body. However, one who has Yang Release chakra within them, can never be killed by conventional methods, which grants the bearer of the mark eternal youth and immortality.
Chakra & Stamina Cost : 500 & 275 (to cast). Releasing the seal costs none.
Hand Seals & Rank: 4 + S
Seal Type: Even
Effect: Restores all nexus stats , HP, chakra control and status conditions to 100%. Includes Sage Mode and Inner Gate 'near death state'.

No, because that would cause the forms to be broken and the only time the side effects of those were even avoid was during the movie Bonds for Inner Gates and Six Paths wearing off during the battle with Sasuke and Naruto but either or he was still running out of chakra
Sp. Passive Effect: Possessing Yang Release = Target user cannot age beyond their mid-20s and are Immortal.
Restrictions & Requirement: Must have 100% Yang Release Mastery. May be cast on another person-- but will fade after one use unless user has Yang Element. Unable to use after activation for 1 month IRL. Can only be undo/broken if user has yang Release/Yin-yang release.
Ap Cost: 600

Jutsu for Vidav---
Vidav Jutsu wrote:


+ - Tiger Eyes' Hypnotism - >
> Vidav glares into an opponent's eyes and plunges his will deep into his victim's mind. Target becomes hypnotized by the caster, unable to resist his will and do his bidding. The eyes of the tiger intimidates even the most brave. Even as the victim is hypnotized, Vidav is deeply connected to the mental state of the victim, able to read his mind effectively to determine the truth. This jutsu may also be used to interrupt the Genjutsu of another enemy, saving an ally.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost: 460 & 253
+ Contact + Type: Sight /Touch + Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 1 + S
+ Effect: Hypnotizes target = Caster can control actions of opponent in place of his own for a grand total of 5 turns. + Target must answer all questions truthfully. (Paralysis. Target must answer all questions truthfully-- that they are conscious of.)  |  Negate effect of 1 S class Genjutsu on an ally.
+ Restrictions and Drawbacks:

++ - Suiton: Mirror World Phantasm - >
> Using Suiton, Vidav creates a large mirror which reflects the image of the caster that looks into it. In response, creates a mirror clone of the caster. This mystic mirror copies the opponent down to the last detail, as well as the jutsu they control. This jutsu forces an opponent to attack themselves, which also results in damage to the enemy's mind.  
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost: 500 & 325
+ Contact + Type: Sight + Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 1 + S
+ Effect: Creates a full identical clone of opponent. Opponent Actions = Auto Blocked. Clone will counter each attack original uses with its own jutsu. Each time a Jutsu is countered and dispelled-- opponent's mind Gauge is reduced -15% each attack.
+ Limit: 4.
+ Restrictions and Drawbacks: Block can only work on Melee, Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Bukotsujutsu.

+ - Medical Ninjutsu: Symbiosis-
> Similar to the puppet technique, Vidav uses chakra threads to connect to an ally. However, unlike traditional strings meant to manipulate targets, these strings add an extension that interacts with the attached parties circulatory system, nervous system and chakra network. Through this method, not only is one able to transfer charka, but able to influence their allies chakra nature from a distance. The applications for this technique are varied, including transferring and sharing chakra, removing Genjutsu from allies, but also using another's body and senses to cast Genjutsu on an enemy, making it harder to avoid or counter.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost (Upkeep): 500 & 325 (325 & 211)
+ Type: Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 1 + S rank
+ Effect: Chakra and resources between Summon and Summoner is now shared. + Also the two are aware of both's surroundings through partially shared senses and gain telepathy between them. + While upkeep is paid, the following abilities may be used once for actions.

Mind Gauge = 100% + Negate up to S Rank Genjutsu
Heals X1.30 HP + Remove 1 Status Condition. > Trade HP or 1 Status Condition to other.
Transfer Genjutsu Contact type from one user to another.
Recovers X1.20% of stamina + -1 Stress > Trade Stamina w/o Stress


+ Restrictions and Drawbacks: Only Maximum of 2 of the above options can be used per turn. Options takes a separate action to trigger. + While Symbiosis is active, the caster cannot cast any other jutsu during its duration. + Reactions used by Vidav causes the jutsu to break, and must be recast if to be used again.

(Redoing this jutsu now that I understand the effects per rank)
5.+ - Sacred Tiger Claws- - > Shinsei Tora no Tsume

> A sacred jutsu bound to the weapons of the Tigers. Their claws always tore their enemies to shreds, and now too can they use them to rend through space itself. By slashing at a pocket of space, one may tear through reality and cross space through the claw-shaped slash. The tears can be used for multiple purposes from fast-travel teleportation to evading enemy attacks by cutting a portal via the claws. With careful placement and proper control, one can use the portals to bypass enemy defenses or redirect an enemy's attack. One must have a clear location/idea in mind of where each tear in space occurs.
+ Chakra & Stamina Cost: 400 & 260  > Lvl 2.= X 1.15 cost.
+ Type: Defense, Supplementary
+ Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0 + ?
+ Effect: Instant Travel (May travel with 1 extra person through portal/contact) | User evade All Enemy Actions
+ Lvl 2: Reflect 1 Enemy Attack against new target | 1 Action = Can’t be blocked/reflected.
+ Requirement & Restriction: Jikku Manipulation Knowledge + Must have “Tiger Claw” Weapon Equipt, forged from Shinkoku territory.
+Creator: Asura Jiin
AP Cost: 700

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6. Kunai Tuning Fork
An oddly made two prong kunai. It is not ideal for combat, but is capable of dealing a blow when needed. However, its more unique feature comes from its constitution of the metal. When struck, the sound it produces is clear and reacts on a high-level pitch that is almost not audible for animals' hearing. It is proven as a great tool for those who value the use of Genjutsu.
Type: Ninja Tool.
Damage: _____ + Sound Base Genjutsu cannot be blocked by earplugs.
Blue Print X 1____ Ingot + Optional -1 Gem = Makes 3


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