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PostSubject: Hayabusa/Shadow's Licenses Request   August 8th 2016, 14:48

The following were from before the update. With that being said, will I have to put the AP cost out for them since they were from before the update? Thanks in advance.

Also, these might have to be edited to meet new combat. From what I understand, there is no long an Action Booster? Thus, we need to come up with another drawback for my Sonritzu Dome technique. Could you help with this? Perhaps change them to your liking? Thanks.

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PostSubject: Re: Hayabusa/Shadow's Licenses Request   August 8th 2016, 20:57


  • Answer to the question, No you would not need to.

  • That I can also look into I'll also be adding a chart for custom techniques to show the range for everyone. To show what is allowed, and making it easier for others.

  • Give me an example of each one of the techniques as if you were in a battle so there is a better feel for them cause the first one, throws me off a bit as well as the 4th.
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PostSubject: Re: Hayabusa/Shadow's Licenses Request   August 9th 2016, 09:19

1. Sennin- Nature Chakra Enhancement Technique

Basically, it is to use Nature Chakra to conjure jutsu. Almost like calories converting into pure energy. So.
Shadow uses: + - Fire Release: Immense Fire Excitation - > (Chakra & Stamina Cost: 600 & 390) w/ Nature Chakra Enhancement. Instead of CD 600 and SD 390, it'd be (CD + SD x .75 =NCD)(600 + 390 = 990 x .75 = 743 NCD). The effect also keeps the flames from being controlled by as outside entity without the use of Nature Chakra or Sennin mode by means such as Kyuubi control flames.

2. Medical – Rapid Memory Loss

Shadow and Brad are fighting. Shadow uses this technique. Brad uses Chidori three times while this technique is activated (within the five post span). Brad goes to use the technique a fourth time, but he has forgotten the technique temporarily (4 turns). It is a medical jutsu that prevents the over use of a technique.

3. Genjutsu Dome: Sonritzu

This one is basically a second version of an existing Genjutsu. The only difference is this makes it airborne, making an invisible barrier around Shadow that inflicts the technique.

4. Time & Space: Prison Limbo

Picture this as a Hyperbolic time chamber basically. In battle, this is almost like Tsukiyomi, except the trapped actually ages. Almost like Limbo from Inception if you have ever seen that. So, unlike Tsukiyomi, time exists in a dimension that is shaped by the creator. And when the target is pulled out of the dimension, the aging is reversed. HOWEVER, everything else remains. For example. If two people were pulled in at the same time, and they fought, and one of them had their arm cut off, upon being pulled back, the arm would still be gone.

Is that more understandable?

5. Medical: Mind Enhancement
I think this one is fairly self explanatory.
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PostSubject: Re: Hayabusa/Shadow's Licenses Request   August 18th 2016, 18:43

The following is a revision to jutsu 4 to meet the new rule "Jutsu cannot increase Training Points"

4. Time & Space: Prison Limbo
A place where one is kept as either punishment, or for training. Another dimension created where the time is accelerated. The time in this portal goes by ten years a day, making the person age. The space is infinite, being what the creator of the dimension wants it to be. When finally pulled out of the dimension, the age process reverses. However, the mental AND physical toll is critical and very real. Though balance is restored to ones body, excluding major bodily changes.
Rank: ?
CD | SD : 800 | 300
In Battle Effect: Genjutsu like dimension that traps target for 3 posts| Mind Damage 80% | Spiritual Energy – 50% for two weeks |Physical Energy – 25% for 2 weeks
Out Of Battle Effect: Trapped for Max Health / 50 Days (Round Down)| Drain Negated| -25 Max HP Per 12 Hrs| Training Gains Doubled|Accelerated Aging
Out Of Battle/After Battle Effect(When returning to real dimension): + 50 Max HP Per Day returned| Training Gains Cut In Half for same amount of days as Limit was doubled| Reverse Accelerated Aging
Restriction: Major changes to character cannot be reversed by hospital or any kind of jutsu, major physical changes are irreversible. (Such as terminal illness, being killed, natural bodily changes, changes to blood, etc.)

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PostSubject: Re: Hayabusa/Shadow's Licenses Request   August 18th 2016, 23:32


  • 1 - Would have to be denied because of the fact that the point of Sage Mode is to have players create Senjutsu with techniques they have instead of creating something that replaces that Chakra & Stamina Cost with it being Nature Chakra, because its going to be stronger than before which allows players to have a say Rank E technique shoot up to a Rank D or C depending on the outcome.

  • 2 - I won't lie, that would be better as a Genjutsu, not only are you causing them to forget a technique but at the same time would it not be easier to hit their brain a bit harder.

  • 3 - May want to rethink that technique as the only way to up Actions is by techniques created before the site. Players will not be able to create Action Boost techniques just yet. As well Items do exist to boost actions.

  • 4 - Saw the revamped version, but try and place a spoiler for the effects cause its looks all clustered together in honesty.

  • 5 - It does but this goes back to the 3rd thing I was speaking of before. The reason is because of the technique chart that will be added to show what players can added based upon rank. Its harder to deal with cause of table coding on this host site sometimes gets weird when editing.


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PostSubject: Re: Hayabusa/Shadow's Licenses Request   August 19th 2016, 09:01

1- Understood. I will disband this one.

2- I understand why one might think that. I even fought with the idea on whether or not it would be medical or Genjutsu myself. However, I chose and choose to stick with Medical. Genjutsu seems like something that alters reality in a sense, where as Medical: there is a level of understanding of medical, science, anatomy, and the psyche in order to use destructive medical chakra to be able to alter the brain in such a temporary matter. Almost like a medically induced amnesia. The chakra targets the parts of the psyche that are overly used and numbs them. This is why I stand by Medical.

3- 3. Genjutsu Dome: Sonritzu – Nature chakra it used to exert Hayabusa/Shadow’s Sonritzu Genjutsu. This contact type acts as all and any Genjutsu contact type simultaneously
Rank: ?
Nature Chakra Drain|Stamina Drain: 700|200
Effect: Undetectable (Unless using doujutsu, Genjutsu expert, or in Sage Mode), Opponent MUST roll against this technique or 50% auto Mind Damage to get out of.
Drawbacks:10% Mind Damage to user if failed to bind. Must Roll for bind (Roll # + 7 = Result)

4. Time & Space: Prison Limbo
A place where one is kept as either punishment, or for training. Another dimension created where the time is accelerated. The time in this portal goes by ten years a day, making the person age. The space is infinite, being what the creator of the dimension wants it to be. When finally pulled out of the dimension, the age process reverses. However, the mental AND physical toll is critical and very real. Though balance is restored to ones body, excluding major bodily changes.
Rank: ?
CD | SD : 800 | 300
Battle Effect:
 
Training Effect:
 
Restriction: Major changes to character cannot be reversed by hospital or any kind of jutsu, major physical changes are irreversible. (Such as terminal illness, being killed, natural bodily changes, changes to blood, etc.)

5- I can agree to put this one on hold until the chart is added if you can agree that I don' thave to pay for the approval lol
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PostSubject: Re: Hayabusa/Shadow's Licenses Request   August 21st 2016, 23:09



2. Medical – Rapid Memory Loss- A jutsu that puts harmful chakra into the air, with the help of nature chakra, and invades the target’s mind through any and all bodily entrances and targets overused and repetitive techniques, skills, or abilities, making the target temporarily forget how to use them.
Rank: B
NCD|CD|Stamina: 150|200| 100
Effect: After using something repetitively three times within the 5 post time span, target forgets how to use it for 4 turns.

3. Genjutsu Dome: Sonritzu – Nature chakra it used to exert Hayabusa/Shadow’s Sonritzu Genjutsu. This contact type acts as all and any Genjutsu contact type simultaneously
Rank: ?
Nature Chakra Drain|Stamina Drain: 700|200
Effect: Undetectable (Unless using doujutsu, Genjutsu expert, or in Sage Mode), Opponent MUST roll against this technique or 50% auto Mind Damage to get out of.
Drawbacks:10% Mind Damage to user if failed to bind. Must Roll for bind (Roll # + 7 = Result)

4. Time & Space: Prison Limbo (Need to revamp same as me lol as Time/Space can no longer focus on Training Gains/Points. Due to restriction ruling.)
A place where one is kept as either punishment, or for training. Another dimension created where the time is accelerated. The time in this portal goes by ten years a day, making the person age. The space is infinite, being what the creator of the dimension wants it to be. When finally pulled out of the dimension, the age process reverses. However, the mental AND physical toll is critical and very real. Though balance is restored to ones body, excluding major bodily changes.
Rank: ?
CD | SD : 800 | 300
In Battle Effect: Genjutsu like dimension that traps target for 3 posts| Mind Damage 80% | Spiritual Energy – 50% for two weeks |Physical Energy – 25% for 2 weeks
Out Of Battle/After Battle Effect: Trapped for Max Health / 50 Days (Round Down)| Drain Negated| -25 Max HP Per 12 Hrs| Training Limit, 14 Daily|Accelerated Aging
Out Of Battle/After Battle Effect(When returning to real dimension): + 50 Max HP Per Day returned| Training Gains Cut In Half for same amount of days as Limit was doubled| Reverse Accelerated Aging
Restriction: Cannot be healed by hospital or any kind of jutsu, major physical changes are irreversible.

5. Medical: Mind Enhancement – SMALL ISSUE with this one…you also didn’t place up a rank for it sOOOOO yeah lol.
This jutsu coats the body of the target in a form of chakra the boosts mind to body coordination by entering the brain. It does have a downfall in the end though.
Rank: B
CD|SD: 300| 120
Effect: Boosts Actions to target by + 1 for 3 posts
Drawback: 5% Mind Damage when expired
Restriction: Cannot stack on same target

Notes:

-Time/Space cannot effect Training Gains/Points anymore, yes I have to revamp mine as well. (lol)
- ? marked jutsu cannot be allowed unless clan technique (So sharingan or Mangekyou using it thumbs up!)
- And costs will be revamped as well.
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PostSubject: Re: Hayabusa/Shadow's Licenses Request   August 22nd 2016, 14:22

2. I assume this one is good to go?

3. Will make Rank S

4. Will also make Rank S. Also, replace training increase to EXP gain + 50%. And in the drawbacks, instead of training decrease, EXP gain -50%
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PostSubject: Re: Hayabusa/Shadow's Licenses Request   September 8th 2016, 10:38

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PostSubject: Re: Hayabusa/Shadow's Licenses Request   September 12th 2016, 10:44

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PostSubject: Re: Hayabusa/Shadow's Licenses Request   September 12th 2016, 16:25

The jutsu chart was added btw did you use that to review over the techniques? Cause i remember you stating you would wait till it was up.
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PostSubject: Re: Hayabusa/Shadow's Licenses Request   September 20th 2016, 23:39

Word of advice try and steer clear of using techniques that improve EXP and/or Training Gains/Points reason being cause of the new way of gaining EXP has been added and everything that is done within character is giving EXP.
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PostSubject: Re: Hayabusa/Shadow's Licenses Request   September 21st 2016, 00:08

2. Medical – Rapid Memory Loss- A jutsu that puts harmful chakra into the air, with the help of nature chakra, and invades the target’s mind through any and all bodily entrances and targets overused and repetitive techniques, skills, or abilities, making the target temporarily forget how to use them.
Rank: B
NCD + Stamina Cost: 300 & 135 < New Costs
Effect: After using something repetitively three times within the 5 post time span, target forgets how to use it for 4 turns.
[Approved with this costing.]

3. Genjutsu Dome: Sonritzu – Nature chakra it used to exert Hayabusa/Shadow’s Sonritzu Genjutsu. This contact type acts as all and any Genjutsu contact type simultaneously
Contact Type: Varies
Rank: ?
Nature Chakra Drain + Stamina Drain: 700 + 525 < New Costs
Effect: Undetectable Genjutsu (Doujutsu or Sage Mode have see through Genjutsu abilities) + Mind Gauge -66% (Targets unable to release technique)
Drawback: If bounced back Caster takes Mind Gauge Halved as damage.
Approved with these effects and costs.

4. Time & Space: Prison Limbo
Change the wording a bit to suit the effects given. Due to the long system of having it work along that line. Its hard to do all that jut making it something like so. From what I typed within the effects verses what you had. In a way this dimension technique can still exist as Tsukiyomi was a Genjutsu with a Time/Space effect to it. So in a way this technique falls under that.
A place where one is kept as either punishment, or for training. Another dimension created where the time is accelerated. The time in this portal goes by ten years a day, making the person age. The space is infinite, being what the creator of the dimension wants it to be. When finally pulled out of the dimension, the age process reverses. However, the mental AND physical toll is critical and very real. Though balance is restored to ones body, excluding major bodily changes.
Rank: ?
CD | SD : 800 + 600 < New Costs
Mine:
 

Yours:
 

5. Medical: Mind Enhancement.
This jutsu coats the body of the target in a form of chakra the boosts mind to body coordination by entering the brain. It does have a downfall in the end though.
Rank: B > Change to E
CD|SD: 300| 120 > New Costs (75 + 11)
Effect: Boosts Actions to target by +1 for 2 posts
Drawback: 5% Mind Damage when expired < Making Mind Gauge -5% and safer on your or partner’s end.
Restriction: Cannot stack on same target
Approved with these effects and costs.
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PostSubject: Re: Hayabusa/Shadow's Licenses Request   September 21st 2016, 00:08

2. Medical – Rapid Memory Loss- A jutsu that puts harmful chakra into the air, with the help of nature chakra, and invades the target’s mind through any and all bodily entrances and targets overused and repetitive techniques, skills, or abilities, making the target temporarily forget how to use them.
Rank: B
NCD + Stamina Cost: 300 & 135 < New Costs
Effect: After using something repetitively three times within the 3 post time span, target forgets how to use it for 4 turns.
Approved with these effects and costs.

3. Genjutsu Dome: Sonritzu – Nature chakra it used to exert Hayabusa/Shadow’s Sonritzu Genjutsu. This contact type acts as all and any Genjutsu contact type simultaneously
Contact Type: Varies
Rank: ?
Nature Chakra Drain + Stamina Drain: 700 + 525 < New Costs
Effect: Undetectable Genjutsu (Doujutsu or Sage Mode have see through Genjutsu abilities) + Mind Gauge -66% (Targets unable to release technique)
Drawback: If bounced back Caster takes Mind Gauge Halved as damage.
Approved with these effects and costs.

4. Time & Space: Prison Limbo
Change the wording a bit to suit the effects given. Due to the long system of having it work along that line. Its hard to do all that jut making it something like so. From what I typed within the effects verses what you had. In a way this dimension technique can still exist as Tsukiyomi was a Genjutsu with a Time/Space effect to it. So in a way this technique falls under that.
A place where one is kept as either punishment, or for training. Another dimension created where the time is accelerated. The time in this portal goes by ten years a day, making the person age. The space is infinite, being what the creator of the dimension wants it to be. When finally pulled out of the dimension, the age process reverses. However, the mental AND physical toll is critical and very real. Though balance is restored to ones body, excluding major bodily changes.
Rank: ?
CD | SD : 800 + 600 < New Costs
Mine:
 

Yours:
 

5. Medical: Mind Enhancement.
This jutsu coats the body of the target in a form of chakra the boosts mind to body coordination by entering the brain. It does have a downfall in the end though.
Rank: B > Change to E
CD|SD: 300| 120 > New Costs (75 + 11)
Effect: Boosts Actions to target by +1 for 2 posts
Drawback: 5% Mind Damage when expired < Making Mind Gauge -5% and safer on your or partner’s end.
Restriction: Cannot stack on same target
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PostSubject: Re: Hayabusa/Shadow's Licenses Request   September 21st 2016, 13:12

I'm fine with all of the above. The only thing missing is the Out of Battle effect on #4. I suppose it would be very similar to what you have. Your way actually makes this a little easier. Let me take a stab at it.

Time & Space Effect: Target(s) hidden and concealed from outside world for 'X' amount of days + 1 Day = 10 Years (MAX HP & Nexus Attributes / (Years x 1.5) [Rounded Down] = New Max HP & Base Attributes. (Effects last for 'X' amount of Days.) + Can be broken out of if held as prisoner (User's Max Chakra - Target's Max Chakra = Word Count to escape)
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PostSubject: Re: Hayabusa/Shadow's Licenses Request   September 22nd 2016, 22:08

So are you aiming to have the genjutsu not truly be a genjutsu to where its not damaging the mind either?
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PostSubject: Re: Hayabusa/Shadow's Licenses Request   September 23rd 2016, 14:38

Exactly. That's why it's a Time & Space technique. You see all these Ninjutsu Time & Space, I wanted to mix it up with a Genjutsu type.
I'm not opposed to adding Mind Dmg that sticks around for a few days after, if that's something you think needs to happen.
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PostSubject: Re: Hayabusa/Shadow's Licenses Request   September 24th 2016, 14:25

I see well be sure to note that Genjutsu's do cause Mind Gauge to decrease by a certain degree. Others not so much. I believe only a few do mind gauge damage but not all.
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PostSubject: Re: Hayabusa/Shadow's Licenses Request   September 24th 2016, 20:35

Fair enough. How about + 50% Mind Damage for a week IF broken out of prematurely?
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PostSubject: Re: Hayabusa/Shadow's Licenses Request   September 26th 2016, 01:15

It can be done right then and there. Mind Gauge can be healed after going to see a doctor. Also it can be ranged from 66% to 75% the choice is up to you.
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PostSubject: Re: Hayabusa/Shadow's Licenses Request   September 26th 2016, 13:07

Ok. Leave it at 75% as well upon return.
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PostSubject: Re: Hayabusa/Shadow's Licenses Request   September 26th 2016, 21:32

Alright post up the finalized version and I shall go over it.
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PostSubject: Re: Hayabusa/Shadow's Licenses Request   September 27th 2016, 11:56

Time & Space: Prison Limbo
A place where one is kept as either punishment, or for training. Another dimension created where the time is accelerated. The time in this portal goes by ten years a day, making the person age. The space is infinite, being what the creator of the dimension wants it to be. When finally pulled out of the dimension, the age process reverses. However, the mental AND physical toll is critical and very real. Though balance is restored to ones body, excluding major bodily changes.
Rank: ?
CD | SD : 800 + 600
Genjutsu Effect: Target trapped 4 turns with Paralyzed Battle Effect + Mind Gauge -75% + 4 Turns = 40 Years (MAX HP & Nexus Attributes / Years [Rounded Down] = New Max HP & Base Attributes. (Effects last for 2 Days.)

Time & Space Effect: Target(s) hidden and concealed from outside world for 'X' amount of days + 1 Day = 10 Years (MAX HP & Nexus Attributes / (Years x 1.5) [Rounded Down] = New Max HP & Base Attributes. (Effects last for 'X' amount of Days.) + Can be broken out of if held as prisoner (User's Max Chakra - Target's Max Chakra = Word Count to escape) + Mind Gauge -75%
Drawback: Cannot be healed by any kind.
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PostSubject: Re: Hayabusa/Shadow's Licenses Request   September 28th 2016, 22:40

Genjutsu and Time Space... that's too many effects buddy four is max. Even if its broken up in two different groups of it being one Genjutsu and the other being Time/Space the total amount still needs to be four.

I can be honest with you when it comes to this technique is going to be a hell drainer. Because you are causing a something to feat to happen which what Ninjutsu does and then causing an illusion to take over that said space. You are honestly creating a Ningenjutsu.
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PostSubject: Re: Hayabusa/Shadow's Licenses Request   September 30th 2016, 19:39

A Version 1 and a Version 2 then. Genjutsu effect has 3 effects, Time & Space has 4. If they must be 2 versions of the same technique and learned separately, I'm ok with that.
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PostSubject: Re: Hayabusa/Shadow's Licenses Request   October 6th 2016, 13:14

Alright so Grave and I have discussed and this is the result. The technique is going to be split into two separate versions.

Space – Time: Genjutsu: Jigoku Tsukiyomi (God of the Moon Hell)
A place where one is kept as either punishment, or for training. Another dimension created where the time is accelerated. The time in this portal goes by ten years a day, making the person age. The space is infinite, being what the creator of the dimension wants it to be. When finally pulled out of the dimension, the age process reverses. However, the mental AND physical toll is critical and very real. Unlike it's counter part, all things that happen physically here are reversible.
Rank: ?
CD | SD : 800 + 600
Effect: Target trapped 4 turns with Paralyzed Battle Effect + Mind Gauge -75% + 4 Turns = 40 Years (MAX HP & Nexus Attributes / Years [Rounded Down] = New Max HP & Base Attributes. (Effects last for 2 Days.)
Drawback: Cannot be healed by any kind

Space – Time: Ninjutsu: Jigoku Tsukiyomi (God of the Moon Hell)
A place where one is kept as either punishment, or for training. Another dimension created where the time is accelerated. The time in this portal goes by ten years a day, making the person age. The space is infinite, being what the creator of the dimension wants it to be. When finally pulled out of the dimension, the age process reverses. However, the mental AND physical toll is critical and very real. Though balance is restored to ones body, excluding major bodily changes.
Rank: ?
CD | SD : 800 + 600
Effect: Target(s) hidden and concealed from outside world for 'X' amount of days + 1 Day = 10 Years (MAX HP & Nexus Attributes / (Years x 1.5) [Rounded Down] = New Max HP & Base Attributes. (Effects last for 'X' amount of Days.) + Can be broken out of if held as prisoner (User's Max Chakra - Target's Max Chakra = Word Count to escape)
Drawback: Cannot be healed by any kind.
Restriction: Can ONLY be used after a KO and taking a prisoner or consensually

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PostSubject: Re: Hayabusa/Shadow's Licenses Request   October 7th 2016, 12:56

Those are good cause we went over them together buddy.
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PostSubject: Re: Hayabusa/Shadow's Licenses Request   October 25th 2016, 11:24

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PostSubject: Re: Hayabusa/Shadow's Licenses Request   March 24th 2017, 18:13

By the time his opponent’s form of Susano’o had formed, Hayabusa had already been a fully transformed humanoid version of the Houkou. And it seemed as though the woman, as always thus far, knew all about it. He began to have tunnel vision, looking eyes only on his opponent. She was beginning to excite him; in ways only one has done in battle. But, never at such caliber. If he could come to par with this woman and excite her in the same way, there is absolutely no reason he couldn’t go back home and take his rightful place at reigning Kazekage…
He then began to wonder… where were the Kages? Why weren’t they here defending their people? At least one of two of them?
‘Hmph… that settles it for me…’ he said telepathically, connecting it seems only to his opponent. ‘I won’t die here… I’m about to become the next Kazekage. I have you to thank in pushing that resolve…’ he said. ‘I expected you had to have some kind of extra bit up your sleeve. If we are both to walk away from this alive… I do truly hope to cross paths with you again.’
“Absorb…” he said, as the Crimson gourd strapped at his waist, whilst at close range, absorbed the formed armor cloaking his opponent, diminishing it into nothing. He then extended Nature Chakra into the air surrounding him and his opponent, insensible to the naked eye. For the first time, the humanoid version of him opened its mouth. The humanoid Houkou, encased in Susano’o, held its sword with its upper dominant arms, slashing at her horizontally with high force…
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